hello, My name is Akumu Tara Tenshi. (Akumu means Nightmare in Japanese. Tara is my nickname and but it's not Jpaanese. Tenshi means Angel in Japanese. So my name means Nightmare Angel.) I'm 19 years old and I go to To-oh university, where L and Light also go. My hair is dark melanoid starless (that means black) and my eyes are a deep cerise that are framed with dark, thick long eyelashes. My skin is ivory and smooth, in a single layer over my slightly bronounced bones. I'm sort of toll at 5'8", and I weigh 100 pouds (I'm not anroexic but I'm just skinny.) and I have curves in the right places. But they're not excessive. Also I go to To-oh university. I'm really smart but I'm not at the top of my class becasue I don't do my work because I usual rebel, not like that geek Light (lol).
Anyway I was alking down the courtyard one day and L was walking along too. "Hi Akumu!" he said enthustiastically, coming over and smiling.
"Hi L," I said kinda flirtily.
"So, I was wondering-" he started. But then my friend Yume called me, and L couldn't figure out his sentence because Light and that stupid prep Misa called him away.




This sounds too much like My Immortal.
Misa is not a prep she is a gothic lolita.
You've made your OC too much of a Mary Sue already.
The chapter is too short.
I HATE Misa as well since she is pathetic and acts like a whore but her dress sense is great!
I write fanfics too and even if I dislike a character I don't spend all my time dissing them so lay of Misa
You're elitist.
You really like labels.
You haven't defined what makes her a Mary Sue.
Chapters are chapters, man. Ever heard of vignettes?
Slut shaming! Yaaaay!
Can't stop won't stop.